Thursday, 26 September 2013

Descriptive Writing (My Best Buddy – Kareen)

GE 1401 T26 – Descriptive Writing 
Wong Oi Man (Student ID: 53568137) 19/9/2013

(546 words)
My Best BuddyKareen

With exquisite taste in vivid clothes and ornaments, Kareen is a mixed-blood of Chinese and Indonesian.  She likes tranquillity and loves nature, like me.  I first met her on my trip to Perth last summer.

She gently pulled down the blind of the oval window, sat back and closed her eyes.  Outside, the flood of crimson blaze silhouetted against the horizon was stunning, though.  On board the 747 and flying across the ocean, Kareen and I shared the same goal – to attend an advanced English course in Perth.  Her amiable manners and sincerity throughout allowed me to enjoy the flight.

Whispering wind whooshed wildly when we strode out of the airport.  Kareen walked briskly, like a businesswoman.  She pushed her shoulder-length, side-parting straight hair behind her ears to give a smart look.  Her slim body looked even slimmer because of her long legs.  Along with a rosy complexion, she had got a few freckles on her cheeks like many teenage girls.  Naturally, her bewitching smile was as bright as sunshine.  One should have noticed a pointy chin and a dimple on each side of her oval-face when she smiledIndeed, trailing after her broad-shouldered, well-proportioned and near perfect torso, I couldn’t help admiring – Gorgeous!  She must be the apple of the poet’s eye! 

We hit it off right from the start in Perth, as we were roommates in the period of our homestayOne morning, an appealing odour filled the bedroom, went through my nose, body and every nerve.  The aroma of tortilla led me to the kitchen.  To my surprise, Kareen was mastering a frying pan in her hand as skilfully as a top-notch chef.  What a workaholic and an early riser she was!  She had prepared a full set of amazing breakfast for me before I woke up!  Wasn’t she superior to those who worked in a Michelin 5-star restaurant?  Her culinary skills were superb.  My heart melted in that cool morning and Kareen was like an angel who cared about me.

Despite the feminine look, Kareen possessed the heart of lion.  One day downtown, when we were invited by the street performers to join their show, Kareen responded with a resounding ‘yes’ in no hesitation.  Her arms became weeping willows swaying in the wind when she danced ballet in the street to play Margot Fonteyn.  She was as happy as a lark when the audience clapped hands to applaud her show.  Incongruously, I could only stand still with my mouth dropped open in astonishment.  She leaped toward me with raised eyebrows and sheer laughter, trying to help me overcome my fear.  Only then could I screw up my courage to join in.  “All that glitters is not gold” never applied to this exuberant girl, of course.  Gifted with a good many talents, she would never show pride in her abilities and always strived to work hard.  Having a high opinion of Kareen, I appreciated her company very much!

Certainly a great buddy, Kareen is willing to share and full of enthusiasm.  As well, she never betrays but only accepts on every occasion – I have a tremendous lot to learn from her!  Time flies like an arrow.  I miss Kareen now because she has gone to Canada for studying.  I treasure her friendship forever!



Sunday, 8 September 2013

Something about ME......

I am Wong Oi Man, Winnie. Congratulations to all CityU's students! University life is really full of excitement and challenges. Starting a new stage of life, participating in different activities (eg Orientation Camp, voluntary services, workshops held by Student Development Services), having a flexible timetable, meeting a cluster of new people... Don't you feel life is wonderful and gorgeous?

I studied Business, Accounting and Financial Studies as well as Economics in my high school. Now, I am a Year 1 student from College of Business! I haven't decided what major I will take in Year 2, but probably something related to management or marketing. Let's make best use of our Year 1 time and dig out what field we are really interested in.

I have a younger brother and he is studying in Secondary 1. I love playing piano, archery, tennis as well as listening to classical music. In summer vacation, my family and I usually go to travel. I have been to Los Angeles, Las Vegas, Seattle, Vancouver, Mexcio, Perth, Adelaide, Korea and so forth. Experiencing different cultures, communicating with the local people, visiting to different tourist spots really broaden my horizon. 

I feel very lucky to be part of CityU and everything sounds good to me! Hope all of us can have a memorable and fruitful experience in our university life! Cheers!

A Warm Welcome to all of you!

Hi guys, I am Winnie! Welcome to my blog and nice to meet you all! Feel free to comment on my coming posts as your feedback is valuable to me. Hope you enjoy reading it!

Let's strive for success together and treasure the opportunity of learning English here!